Some Days Are Better

October 17, 2011

Some days are better than the rest
They start good and manifest
A happiness and all the rest
Of wonderful things
I hold dear to my chest.

Smile, laugh, feel the joy
See the magnificence
In all the beauty free
Yes, it will all be best
Just believe, be he, she or me.
~ Patrice

© Patrice Clarkson – 2011


  1. I really enjoy the first stanza it has a nice rhythm. Just out of curiosity, why didn’t you keep the rhyme scheme going in the second stanza?


    • Good question. The answer is that I start to write and whatever comes out is what I go with. Never ever know where its going to take me. Just have to trust it will work. Sometimes it does, sometimes not so well.


  2. That’s pretty gutsy. I don’t think I’ve ever been able to do that.


    • Really? I find it fun because I never know where its going to go.


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